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RE: SPU Poetry Contest #4: Witch Prey
Thanks for your thoughtful comments! I played with stanzas and decided I liked it without; I thought it might evoke some of the confusion and swirled-togetherness of the narrator. But that's my own style, for sure—I tend to read aloud as I go and break lines based on the kind of flow I get that way.