This is really top notch :D As I read it I could feel a beat behind it because of the rhythm and flow built into it... Maybe it could be a verse in a rap song one day!

Really great work and I love your conclusion at the end... it's great advice and adds a lot of value to the post.

Keep it up man! Really enjoyed this so thank you :)

If you fancy checking mine out the link is below!

--> Everything Transforms

With love
Hart Floe
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