Poem / Would I change life?
Would I change life?
Sit down for a sec
Let's think about what we get
Give me a minute to think
About life on the brink
I don't find it appealing
I don't want to survive on illegal dealings
The life I have at the moment is relatively comfortable
I don't wanna lose the things I acquired with bruises
I don't see myself going away
Just to return empty handed one day
I plan on making my life great
I will alter my own fate
I won't let anyone else decide
How I should spend my time
I'll be more than glad to fight
'Cause this life's one I don't wanna leave behind
By Ethan
2017/08/26
You are so right Ethan. You will make it your life and be successful at it. You have a gift of expression and a boundless inner depth that can be used to create wonderful poems and adventures. You have been given a gift of talent so cherish it and create something special. Also know that with time, age and experience you will grow during this journey and become something special! With age, I too feel like I've become more real and whole. I know you will too in time. I am proud of you! :D
master you done it again..upvoted...love your poem..kindly check mine toh?
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-bluepost-walk-by-faith-poetry-walk-by-faith-and-work-in-faith-through-jesus-christ
Your way with words makes my mind sway in meditation! Question is how do I get this good? :D
Am I close? https://steemit.com/poetry/@tezmel/an-ex-con-s-cry #teameastafrica :)
I'm not sure if I'm good, I only started writing poems about 4 months ago... I guess it's just reality and meaning that makes it good.
Maybe. Or maybe you are good at it. Either way, many would agree you deliver.
Thank you XD
:)
very deep ,very deep Ethan ,upvoted and followed!!
Great flow and a very enjoyable read! :)
Living life to the fullest, Carpe diem.
This poem has a really deep meaning... I enjoyed reading it thoroughly and it has changed my perspective too upto a certain level.
The words you used has strong means ..
Keep it up mate.. You are a great poet.😉
Thanks bud :D I'm glad it touched you :) have a good weekend ☺
You are the hero I want to be like you and I would be grateful if you supported me
Thanks bud :D leave me a link and I will always :D
Nice poem :)