Poem / Untitled pt 2
Untitled pt 2
Finally! That took forever
I've completed what I needed to do
I went to the bank I went to the grocery store
Hell I even managed to get some shoes
It's about the same time
Maybe I should go back to that street
Where I was stopped
Maybe the person is there I should probably greet
A long walk over to Wall berry street
I've done so much walking I might have blisters on my feet
Should've probably worn them in first
I just hope the blisters don't burst
Here's the place
I don't seem to see any familiar faces
I'll chill for an hour
And see if I can see the wilted smudged flower
Excuse me
They are actually here
Finally that wait felt like a year
That's a pretty neat suit
Hey. I hoped I could find you again today
What seemed to problem you enough to stop me in my way?
As you can see
I'm in need
Not sure that I can help
But I guess I can try
What is it you need?
What is the cause for the burn in your eye?
And with that she handed me a note
Spun around and ran like mountain goat
Guess there's nothing I can do
If she can't give me the problem.
Meet me here again
Tomorrow I'll share my pain
By Ethan
2017/09/10
Read both parts. Interesting how your mind came up with such beautiful content yet somehow it couldn't construct the titles! Weird is so cool :D
xD I really have no idea what to say. But it doesn't bother me... A lot of poets had sonnets and stuff which didn't have titles :)
Beautiful thing is... it doesn't bother me too :D
nice poem ,, @xxsenpaixsamaxx i have a cool poem to share with you hope you gonna love it..@mrblu post i resteem his post..i love his content too..just like yours..https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-don-t-touch-me
He send me links quite often. I also enjoy his works :)
Poems like countenance/psychology reads the mind or reveals it
Amazing, It's very nice and you have a sensitive feeling shown in your words
but the title is the only thing you miss
I can't think of anything as a title.
Hi, great your post. I invite you to see my publications
ohhhhhhhhhhhh nice
I would suggest you put some title on it ^^ It would sound amazing!
I have no idea what to title it as... Like my brain has nothing that would mach it
upvoted
@xxsenpaixsamaxx buddy as always,you have a nice poem..kindly see mine too?
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-just-call-my-name-and-i-ll-be-there
Will do bud :)
What a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it :)
Another intriguing poem with suspense. I love these stories in poem form. It stimulates the brain and imagination. I really enjoy these encounters of mystery. Thank-you as always Ethan for your wonderful creative spirit!!!!! :D
hii dear @xxsenpaixsamaxx, wonderfull poetry u shared and convey the message very diffrent style by choosing poetry. i appreciated you and supported u. resteem, follow.