Beat Down The Muse #4

in #poetry5 years ago (edited)

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The future’s a weirder place
than we thought it would be
when we were young

the greatest of humanity
have not been born yet
they are waiting patiently
for the past to die

I am a word.
At Worst, a meme.
At best a poem
I wait patiently
as I sharpen my pen

It always starts out like this,
The restlessness of the body
The wonderment of the mind
The loathing of reality
The mystery of consciousness

wrestling with my thoughts
poking holes in reality
peeling back perception
waiting for the muse

writing is to create a context in
which other people can think

music is to create a context in
which other people can feel

poetry is to create a context in
which other people can see

Never underestimate the determination
of a soul who is time-rich and cash-poor

Moonlight peeking thru the blinds,
the silent cold of the early morning
Dreams can wait,
it's the NOW that commands

A secret vision of speechless monologue
and overwhelming guidance,
an invisible mansion of
all moods, musings, and mysteries,
an infinite resort of
misfortune and revelations

Chaos is the Rhyme
I'm piecing together space and time


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Also Check Out:
Beat Down The Muse #1

Sometimes you just got to
stay up all night
And beat down the muse

Beat Down The Muse #2

We are painfully aware that our
basic concepts, our language and
our whole way of thinking are
inadequate to describe reality
The struggle to grasp this reality is real

Beat Down The Muse #3

Memories, dreams, and delusions
stream through my mind
primetime visions
of simple days of love
playful smiles of joy
stoner laughs of infinity

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The future’s a weirder place
than we thought it would be
when we were young

Egads! how this rang true as I read... kinda took me on my own nostalgic trip of what I thought these days would be like when I was younger.

To quote a Powderfinger song:

These days turned out nothing like I'd planned.

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Nice rhyme👍 touching words

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thanks! =D


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The poem in its entirety is amazing, complex as each part can take you down a new stream of thought.

I had to smile here though because it had me think of a movie, it can be the entire basis of a blockbuster and is pretty badass.

Never underestimate the determination
of a soul who is time-rich and cash-poor

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@Satorid Amazing poem! Truly. Standing ovation from me for sure!

A secret vision of speechless monologue
and overwhelming guidance,
an invisible mansion of
all moods, musings, and mysteries,
an infinite resort of
misfortune and revelations

Chaos is the Rhyme
I'm piecing together space and time

Love the whole poem in its entirely but this speaks volumes for a poet.

Great piece!

@penderis I think you would really enjoy this poem!

awesome! indeed, my attention is to speak volumes for a poet, like me 'beating down the muse', these whole lil series is of me waiting, dancing and longing for the muse...

I miss my muse! :)

I really really love your poem though, @satorid. I can't say that enough. It's very deep and I so understand this relationship.

Thanx, it is really good :) The poetry, music, writing section reminded me of our perception posts a lot.

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