My Original Poem - look back

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

 Now come the night
I turn into the dark.
The hidden tears in the rain
This is her very trying period.

Came through the open window
Warm to cold obsession. Today, on the banks
of the memory of the dream corpse
You are the joy of the first raft.

Your marble dust and leaves
He is a light dream home country.
And suddenly fights with section
The boat, which washed away a different direction.

I alone so far, I wish
Deep irrepressible desire heart
I want to return to play in the Almighty
One evening stories. 


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buddy you are talented! Keep rocking!

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Thanks for sharing your original poem.

We may wish to return but sometimes it can never happen and it is only a remnant of our memories, but this is the thing that helps us to make these strong inseparable bonds.
Great Poem!

And great comment :)
thnx :D

Test of character in hard times!!!!!

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Beautiful poem dear friend @royalmacro congratulations, thank you very much for giving us your talent.
I wish you a great day

thank you my friend :D

Nice poem buddy
Check mine post too

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Nice Poem, Didn't know there is also a hidden poet inside you. Seems like multi-talented guy ... :)

ha ha ........ nice compliments........ thanks :)

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I love this! I really like the mood. Great job!

thank you anderson :-)

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