An Original Poem: A Love Poem

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

My entry into the Hello Hello Group Activity

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https://goo.gl/images/Ym5Rk8

A LOVE POEM

Just as soon as their eyes met,
She giggled and blushed - a lot,
He was a quite the complete clumsy fool,
Stammering and Stuttering!


He asked - Can I walk you home?
A quick journey took twice as long.
They spoke and spoke of many nothings,
As if lyrics to their own special song.


Pretty soon they went on their first date,
He arrived very, very early –
But she made him wait and wait.
Yet, it was a fantastic night out.


One thing lead to another and another,
Again she made him wait and wait,
Upon the vital question they responded,
Yes, I do!


As water passed beneath the bridge,
The pigeon pair played side by side,
They excelled with excellent and great grades,
Off they skipped to college.


Now that the sun is setting,
Our love birds all grey and passive,
Holding hands on a park bench,
Like cats’ tails inter-twined.

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Hi @rlt47, this poem is such a romantic love story. It narrated on how their first date to their marriage to their old days. A good closing with that picture selection. And for this good love story, here's my tip! Stay Blessed and Have a lovely weekend!

Wow @ainie.kashif - yet another tip. I'm grateful. I'm glad you love the poem. It's my second attempt at writing one - @mirrors has inspired me to try another one.

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Hiii @rlt47

I love this paraghaph

As water passed beneath the bridge,
The pigeon pair played side by side,
They excelled with excellent and great grades,
Off they skipped to college.

I love this beautiful words

Hi @poocut - I didn't give it a second thought until you pointed it out :)) - Thank-you for your very, very kind words and appreciation.

Like two sweet lovers intertwined, so was a love in the past. I like your poem @ rlt47
I copy you on the HHG9

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