hi= as a friend, it is a good poem, but it needs the soul, well, i read it three times, i like it, but the soul is not in the writing itself as required, but in the pictures, i believe that this poem is excellent but it needs better views to make it as a window we need to look through it to see our idea as most of the followers here are " no English native !"
voted and resteemid
I appreciate ur input my friend. It is the first poem i have written in a very very long time and have lots of skills to work on. But the only way to get better is to write it, post it and wait for people to give feed back. However, if no one is honest about my writings and just always said nice things about it then i would never try to improve. So thank you for being a true friend and giving me your honest opinion.. now that u said that, i have re-read it and i honestly i think i could do better too! ;)