My Home, My Heaven
Hello dearest Steemians! Let's start our day with a big thanks to God. The one and only, who makes us still alive today.
The topic: "What is the best place in the world?"
80% of people answer like:
- Best destination (as I know, they are Green Blue Hole, Cappadocia, Zhangye Danxia, Salar de Uyuni, etc. Maybe you think the same.)
- A perfect sunbath of beach
- Savana
- Very comfortable park
Do you think the same as the points above? Yes, they are some of the beautiful places in this world. But they are nothing if compared with this place.
You will see the differences. And I think you will be happy and hella comfort. Everyone dig it, 100%.
My Home, My heaven
The white wall
With brown pointed window of door frame
And the ceramics floor
Not the velvet
The orchids in a row besides the window
Too fragnant
They embarassed when the east greets
Cool at the outside
Warm inside
Love and affection flow
Reluctant to go
Pretty enough to be seen
Too bad to be left
Memories scattered there
Touch the inner person
Fly in the fresh atmosphere
Stab the depth of heart
Upon entering..
Embrace come close to
With perspiration means
Head this hesitate soul
Never cracked by time
Never gone by night
Never give up because precisely noon
Never likely to snap
My home
That's my home
My heaven
Also my fortness
With the blessed people
Blow the cold night
And keep it in warming
My home
My heaven
Still become like that
As the assistance when sadness comes
And as the eyewitness of the happiness
With love,
Your loyal occupant
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Thanks for sharing @poetry-vibes! Gave me the feels! Big time homesickness attack. :((
Hope you really enjoy it :)
Omg, I feel you deep :( you can make a call to your famili, don't you?
I do speak to them regularly though it's been 2 years since I last went home... so there are naturally moments like these when homesickness attacks badly. 😯
Oh that sounds not good 😢
Have you been back to home. I think you must take the time to have a quality time with your fam.
Home is where the heart is, and that is place we should cherish the most
Nice words and I agree :) thanks for commenting
I also write poems, take a look.
Ok thanks :)
Hi friend, very good !!!!!
You would help me with a vote in my post., Thanks !!! ;)
Hello @raziell :) thank you so much and I'll take the time to see yours
Gracis me gustan tus escritos tienes mi voto. te comparto mis escritos.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@poetry-vibes/the-day-after-yesterday
:)
Wow thank you for taking me on an emotional journey. Thats what reading this beauty has done for me tonight. I love it I felt transported imagining the smells of home and grasping that sense of security that only home can.
The world is beautifulwhen you visit different places but nothing compares to the familiarity and warmth that home brings to the soul. For me anyway :]
I love the line:
It felt like a continuation of my own poem today where I wrote about the darkness of the night .
PS God bless u =)
:)
Thank you so much, friend!
Home is our heaven, this is the point. Whatever how nice other places, home never can't be defeated :)
Home is like a cosy blanket :]
Agree!
Thanks for Share! like your post and love it!
You're welcome. Hope you enjoy it and wait for my next post yeah ☺