First Posting of Original Poetry X2

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

My beautiful friends on their wedding day.
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"Dreams Do come true"

Oh love divine
I say thank you!
For La Senorita's face,
resting upon my chest

Her soft breaths, invisible touches
Against my skin, butterfly winds...

Her eyes are close,
I'll imagine them open
Love...I'll be in awe,
Dreams do come true.

Oh famous American Poets,
definitely would have immortalized you
Japan's Haiku...
And even Shakespeare too!

From the words of Romeo..
I will steal for a moment.
Let them charge me with plagiarism,
More than happy to pay the due...

"I have not seen true beauty, till this night"

Now I must do,
what I know, I will regret.
And awake this angel
Sleeping "comftably" on my chest.

Let me delay, just for five more minutes...
But before I do...
I hope she knows
I'll never let,
Let this moment go.
END

                        "My head hurts even more"
(Read this with a mental picture of an alcoholic father holding his
 new born baby for the very first time)

Is it wise to ask these questions,
In my mind?
Is it wise to tell you?
I need more drink
More than you seem to think,
Before I'm anyone
Before I'm somebody...someone

Should I let them, be my own
Solitary Deliverance.

Should I leave my questions alone?
Leave me alone
Leave you alone.

I say Yes!
Then..I see your face
I ponder what could be
What should be
And if I don't
God..should write a citation
Put my heart at rest
My soul a violation

Regardless of how you think
Or how you feel
I see myself
Walking with you
Talking with you
Being with you
END

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Lovely poem.I hope your friend likes it.

Thank you. This is the first time my poetry is seeing daylight. I'm glad you like it.

@mckoy123 i feel so good for them..
atleast some people are getting what they really desire in life

I just started posting, did not want to show the dark side of me yet. Thanks for the read.

Regardless of reality
Wishes become dream
Dreams do come true
Riding on wings of love.

A double.
Nice poetry

nice poems @mckoy123. I really like your writing. I hope you will not stop to write.
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Interesting poetry with lovely picture

@mckoy123 congratulations to them..

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