My First Love (An Original Poem) - Dedicated To Lovers
Your arms are my world's boundary,
Inside you my heart has found sanctuary.
Your eyes are my soul's mirror,
They defend me against my every fear.
Your lips are my deadly poison,
They make me go wild beyond reason.
Your smile lights up my existence,
When you're away, I cannot bear the distance.
This is our journey, you are my song,
With you by my side, nothing can ever go wrong.
Our love is eternal - my life's greatest success,
Every moment, every memory with you is beyond priceless.
For some people love is truly special, somewhat life-changing and entirely magical. Through these verses I just wanted to bring out the beautiful and transformation-inducing aspect of a very special kind of first love.
This is awesome @jznsamuel! What a beautiful love story ❤️
Thank you @jeanelleybe, glad you liked it :)
That was sweet, well done ;)
Thank you!
I enjoyed your poem. I will like to read more soon. Thank you.
thank you @yourhelper , appreciate your feedback :)
WOW! I'm out of words to describe this. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for the very sweet comment!
you're welcome. :)
that is very so sweet :) :D
thanks a lot :)
Love!
I curate poetry with the tag #onehumanbasket
Find out about it here where there is also a poetry dice challenge!
Thank you very much @robyneggs, will surely check it out!
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woah!!
Nice I liked it very much Upvoted
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