Blue Dream By Jhene Aiko

in #poetry4 years ago

We were coastin' on the coast when you opened my eyes
Made me notice where the ocean was holding the sky, right
I was blinded, your smile shining behind those green eyes
The horizon so enticing please say you'll be mine

Don't wake me up 'cause I'm in love with all that you are
You make me see the truth in things, I think that you are
The remedy for everything it seems that you are
The truth itself because nothing else can take me so far

My afternoon dream when
The world is speedin'
I am still sleepin'
In my blue dream and
I know the meaning
For all the seasons
You are the reason
My love

My mind is open
So wide since you came inside
I feel so alive
Without you life just passes by
Passes by, passes by

Don't wake me up 'cause I'm in love with all that you are
You make me see the truth in things, I think that you are
The remedy for everything it seems that you are
The truth itself because nothing else can take me so far

My afternoon dream when
The world is sleeping
I am still thinking
Of my blue dream
It's, bliss

My afternoon dream when
The world is sleeping
I am still thinking
Of my blue dream
It's, bliss

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Wow gracious dear @joseph you used very beautiful effective words no doubt. It is really a very nice piece of poetry, I personally very enjoyed to read it. Thanks for sharing

Jhene Aiko used to be one of my favourite musical artistes. The cool flow of her songs, wonderful choice of her lyrics, Dido-like calmness of her voice and uniqueness of the instrumentation was just awesome.
I really love her albums:

  • Sail Out
  • Souled Out
  • Sailing Souls
    However, I just don't understand the garbage she's been singing recently, especially her collaboration with Big Sean.
    I hope she gets back to the way she started.

We were coastin' on the coast when you opened my eyes
Made me notice where the ocean was holding the sky, right
I was blinded, your smile shining behind those green eyes
The horizon so enticing please say you'll be mine

Wow the personification in line one of this first verse is awesome.

In the remaining line you used metaphors to express emotions here.

Overall i like your refrain in each verse.
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Those are jhene aiko's lyrics... from the song 😉

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very nice poetry and music

The poem is so great that it shows that it is dedicated to someone whom you love from your heart thank you

Wow what a poetry....

I am always dream but i dream when i woke not when i fell asleep

I always find it difficult to understand poems but I love to read thm. Thanks😊

Lovely poem, hope it's dedicated to someone special

Beautiful artwork and cozy music!

wow! how sweet!

Amazing post and wonderful video thanks for sharing

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I enjoyed reading your post.

This is beaitiful..hope to see you give us more always

Wow i am amazed...

I know this song by Jhene Aiko

I played this alot

Great poetry....

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Beautiful words and beautiful music bewell @joseph

my favorit song ever <3