We were coastin' on the coast when you opened my eyes
Made me notice where the ocean was holding the sky, right
I was blinded, your smile shining behind those green eyes
The horizon so enticing please say you'll be mine

Wow the personification in line one of this first verse is awesome.

In the remaining line you used metaphors to express emotions here.

Overall i like your refrain in each verse.
Beautiful poetry❤❤❤❤❤❤