Abandoned in Gare Central
Where we met,
But October's chill breath
Clouds the window
Obscuring
Your face;
I'm desolate
And out of place,
Unable to catch
My breath…
Or run for your train
that’s already left.
Where we met,
But October's chill breath
Clouds the window
Obscuring
Your face;
I'm desolate
And out of place,
Unable to catch
My breath…
Or run for your train
that’s already left.
hermoso poema
gracias
Wow. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work.
Resteemed. :-)
thanks, @athena
Very beautiful poetry @johnjgeddes. :) I love it. ^^
thank, @littlerph
You're welcome @johnjgeddes! ^^
I always do enjoy your poems. You should try submitting to Rattle they have Ekphrastic Challenge Poetry Submission Calls every month. If you do win you win a prize. You have great Ekphrastic poems that you write. Thank you for sharing.
thanks, @camposmusing
You are welcome. Do you take theme requests? Just wondering :)
I will, but can't guarantee I'll be able to write it if nothing pops. It's the old problem - you can't write a poem to pay a bill ...LOL!!
Such despair... beautifully penned :)
thank you, Tina
Que lindo! Gracias por conpartir :)
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Best wishes!
thank you
Hi @johnjgeddes, I just stopped back to let you know your post was one of my favourite reads and I included it in my Steemit Ramble. You can read what I wrote about your post here.
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