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RE: The Empty House (II)

in #poetry6 years ago

Yes, I'll admit that as I wrote some of my comments to your pieces this week, I thought of this.

And I'm not going to take credit for splitting this from the other poem - I wrote it on its own. I mean, I knew they were kin, as in their name, but I actually didn't think of it as part of that piece. Though looking over it again now, I can definitely see how it could've been. But since one person gave me feedback to split that piece into two pieces and expand each focusing on Eurydice and Demeter, and I've told them nothing needs adding or removing from that piece, I wouldn't have.

Also, considering how many angels can stand on a pinhead, I think they'll all be fine ;-)

And you're welcome, Alain. I'm looking forward to walking with you on your journey as a writer and seeing you outgrow the same advice. Or double down and embrace it as your style :)

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probably both in equal measure, and during the times I should most do the other - all to say, looking forward to it as well, Guy!

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