the repeating lines throughout the poem creates a whimsical, almost dreamlike atmosphere that is supported by the short punctuated and consistent stanzas.

I've always wanted to write a poem in this form. The poem I like most, which is written in this form, uses it to weave together fairy-tales, so I very much agree on the playful and half-there feeling it lends itself to.

And well, it is a love story. Thank you for the kind words :)