On The Hands Of The Truth

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We count money from dishonest jobs, the ego raises the highest level of nonsense on the pedestal of life. Our knowledge is lost in the digital greed of false happiness, we move on the edge of the gap through the smallest level of consciousness - It's time for our change.

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  • True, there is no price on the list of stockbrokers, we are looking for help at the wrong place of illusion. We learn technical things through the essence of empty science, raise spiritual values ​​through the sun of morals - Decision is the decentralized power of every individual, be persistent.

  • Interest is trying to conquer love in this world of false light. Look at the essence of your heart, be an example of the angels who move the power of your spirit. Become a brand and show the way to success, open up your potential of free mind.

  • We have a sign in the feelings of passion, somewhere above the clouds fly the power of love through the new dimensions of sincere intentions. We win together through our good actions, be part of a team that loves you - Be part of the Steemit School - https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n


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Hi, @dobartim, again your poem has managed to amaze me. Much of what you mention are things I have been thinking about, that is, assuming that I am reading you right. This ego driven world which tells us that the person with the most toys wins is just downright toxic. We see it playing out around us everyday. And your work has a pulse on the problem. For example:
“Our knowledge is lost in the digital greed of false happiness, we move on the edge of the gap through the smallest level of consciousness - It's time for our change.”

Is just a spectacular summary of the dominant thought process of our time. This rat race, which, I must be honest, am apart of, is something I have to reflect on after reading your poem.
I can only imagine the interesting discussions you are all having on discord. My time zone is completely out of wack, so I will have to set aside sometime on the weekend to join chat. Please keep on writing. This stuff is precious.

How can i be the part of the steemit school.Such a hypothetical post.You said it right It's time for our change.We have to change our thinking we have to find happiness in helping people.We have to minimize our expectations only then we can be happy.Thanks for the post.

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Nice images, both literal and poetic! The last picture seems to augment the words and both together remind me of the philosophical short novel, 'Jonathan Seagull'. I highly recommend it if you haven't had the pleasure of reading it yet.

Thank you very much, see you on Steemit School

Is this a poem?
I think this is a series of words and languages that are easy to understand

I think the tag poetry is being abused here. There isn't much meaning to the random words here.

I thinks different language with my coutry

Certainly, very different to mine too. Poetry is a form of writing where literary tools are used to express a deeper meaning than the surface meaning of the words. Some metaphor, alliteration, rhyme and meter are sometimes found. Merely having random words assembled into lines and verses doesn't match the word poetry. Maybe it's like that in Macedonia.

I think, its not problem If poetry have word that easy to understand. Basicly, poetry is the deep meaning of words, not just focus to word that easy understand

yes I agree with you sister @anggreklestari

Glad to read your thoughts....👍

first time am visit your blog your poetry heart touching me hat of you

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Thank you for this nice words

Very nice poem.

Thank you very much

wow... beautiful picture...!!
good luck @dobartim

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very good post :) thanks for sharing :) i like it @dobartim

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