Meditation#3: Big bang theory

demostene (55)in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

This is my 3rd attempt at turning thoughts into words and words into poems.

I once was
The nothing 
From which 
You came. 

We're apart  
But we're a part
Of everything 
That had and has to happen.

Truth is a string theory
Weaved from what I see
When I want, I'm right,
If I pay a fee.

Believe me or not, 
I was once 
A leaf from that tree
It's not just me,
It's science, you see?

Did you choose to read this?
Or did I choose that for you?
If you're born a tree,
Are you really free?

-. --- - .... .. -. --. / -- . .- -. ... / .- -. -.-- - .... .. -. --. .-.-.- The end.

If you want to watch my journey on Steemit, you can follow me @demostene. If you really like this post, please upvote and resteem. Thank you!

[BONUS:] here's a song that goes well with my thoughts

#meditation #philosophy #science #life

7 years ago in #poetry by demostene (55)

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redsfallin (52) 7 years ago

Wonderful poem... I love all the in and out of the everything and nothing we are wrapped in the paradox that is our reality....
#cof

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demostene (55) 7 years ago

Thank you @redsfallin - trying to put on paper what I observe

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adrianv (61) 7 years ago

Very profound my friend! Keep it up!

Did you choose to read this?
Or did I choose that for you?

I did not choose to read because in first place yo did not choose to write, It's only a happening...only Life!

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demostene (55) 7 years ago

Exactly :)

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p3paula (46) 7 years ago

nicely done wordplay ^^

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demostene (55) 7 years ago

Thank you p3paula! ^_^

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