Orbpath

in #poetry7 years ago

Orbpath

original poetry


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Lonely is the path with
loud footfalls,                                  
                      silent shockwaves:
filling an empty bowl  
with air.

.
O Dubious memory,
                              water imprint,
fire footfall.                       
Sparkwaves,
                ions & suns
in a full fishbowl—
                         solitude in a crowd.

.
Festivity of solitude,
                    hydrants.
       slinking twister.
              energy funnels coughing
dirtflecks in a half-full   
                     dog bowl.

.
Spitting in disgust,                
charkras.
                         mud footfalls,
           waves of grime,
rage-taut thunderstorm.                  
oilslick sheen on the
              overflowing bowl.


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Crack in the clouds                                   
                                 snow-powdered-grass
Plants in the sky                             
                         air-flowered-saps
Mind in heart                       
         Om-mani-padme-hum
Heartmind                  
              Tat-tvam-asi
I am that           
Aham
.
I am
That I am,
Redundification.
Repetitions, dualistic
Fragments coalesce, storing
Energy high-density, hear
The tale of my path, my
Footfall, the story of
My companion, the
Empty full bowl,
My pet my prey
My self my
Nil. I
Sit
.
Watching clouds unfold,
               nothing footfall.
air that quivers with joy,
loving skyfall.                     
.
              The trail burnt
its trace               
behind my passage,                       
                            bowl become
an orb.

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Written by
@d-pend
10/10/17

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Per aspera ad astra. Sky and mind , you and destiny in the miror of God`s mind. Reflection of positivity and creation of imagination. Wonderful Poem

@d-pend this is a very creative poem and combined with great landscapes. Upvoted. @gold84

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Absolutely wonderful poems🌺

Thank you cecirod1218 :) I appreciate your support.

Like i use to say nice arrangement of lines. your use of words is simply amazing💝💝💝💝💝

Thank you very much, I appreciate you reading my work :D

I love your word placement and the selective way that you set them. Awesome work and the words have such a nice flow.

Do it again. :)

You are talented my friend. Your words like stream came out from the mountain heart. I would like to invite you to my Friday poem challenge :))) You are so welcome to participate and bless my body with the balsam of your words ;))

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