30 DAY HAIKU CHALLENGE DAY 22- JUMP

in #poetry6 years ago

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JUMP

My heart beat races
Stomach turns and can't look down
Now three, two, one jump!

Hi I know this haiku is kind of different from my previous haikus which just seldom talk about nature but I wrote it anyway because it sounds fun. This picture was from our trip in Samboan.Good old days, I just hope I can finally travel and unwind again after my work is done!

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Great brief write. I love haiku. Been writing them now for several years. They kind of hook you. I have to ask ... was the jump as high as it looked? It looked high. I just joined the site yesterday and am looking to build some community. I have posted some poems already and a haiku just today. Love for you to have a look. Maybe we can support each other:) Let me know what you think?

Hi @prydefoltz! Thank you so much for dropping by. Yes, I enjoy writing poems like haiku. What I love about them the most is that with just 17 syllables, you may be able to create a masterpiece. Since you also like writing poems, I encourage you to join my 30 Day Haiku Challenge. I support everyone who joins the challenge. I will visit your page and take a look at your works. Thanks for dropping by! Happy steeming! :)

Thanks ... brokeman. I may just join that challenge:)

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