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RE: SteemitPoetryContest #13 - The Doll
Thanks for these thoughtful comments @poetrybyjeremy... yes, that's exactly it, I found myself chafing at the rigid structure, so played with it a bit to make it fit what I wanted to say. I didn't fully notice it until you pointed it out tho ;)
"rise with the moon" is one of my favorite lines too :)
Well, you should be taking full credit of that. Your unconscious mind is smart as well then :P