DISAPPOINTED [#Day 27] 100 Days Of Poetry Challenge

Trust: finally become a disappointed
The cruelest Gambling life always makes a trust to bid.
We bid the trust in the soul of the man we love.
A great expectation and the need to be a winner always give us the bold,
although it means a stupidity of us.

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Trust: finally become disappointed.
Someone we love had been gone away that means we lost in gambling.
His gone finally become unforgettable things in life.
All trust we bid has gone away leaving us as a loser and in sorrow.

The sweetest promises were offered on the soul of gambling.
Some expectations that make us always have some reasons for the gambling of love.
Finally, the winner went away taking some expectations with him.
The sweetest promises turn to be bitter because the disappointed of loss.

NOT SOMEONE WE LOVE THAT HAS GONE AWAY MAKING US FEEL A BROKEN-HEARTED.
THE PROMISES THOSE WERE BETRAYED BECOME THE SHARPEST KNIFE THAT MAKES ANY WOUND IN OUR HEART.

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Poetry Notes:

This poetry was composed because I saw so many trusts had been bid building a relationship. The sweet promises often betrayed and change into bitterness by untruth. I realized that is not someone I love had gone away that makes me broken hearted, but some promises of someone I love has made me broken-hearted.

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Kecewa [#Hari Ke-27] 100 Hari Tantangan Berpuisi

Rasa percaya, yang pada akhirnya menimbulkan kecewa.
Judi kehidupan yang paling kejam selalu menjadikan rasa percaya sebagai taruhannya.
Kita mempertaruhkan rasa percaya di dada orang yang dicintai.
Harapan menggebu-gebu dan ingin meraih kemenangan selalu saja memberikan keberanian,
meski keberanian berarti kebodohan.

Rasa percaya, yang pada akhirnya menimbulkan kecewa.
Kepergian seseorang yang dicinta berarti kalah dalam perjudian.
Kepergian pada akhirnya menjadi hal yang tidak wajar dalam kehidupan.
Semua rasa percaya yang dipertaruhkan kini dibawa pergi menyisakan pedih kekalahan.

Janji-janji manis yang ditawarkan di atas dada perjudian.
Harapan-harapan yang membuat kita selalu punya alasan melakukan perjudian cinta.
Hingga tiba saatnya pemenang pergi membawa harapan-harapan itu.
Janji-janji manis berubah pahit karena rasa kecewa dari kekalahan.

BUKAN KEPERGIAN SESEORANG TERCINTA YANG PALING MENYAKITI
JANJI YANG DIKHIANATI MENJADI PISAU PALING TAJAM UNTUK MELUKAI HATI.

Catatan puisi:

Puisi ini tercipta karena saya melihat banyak sekali kepercayaan yang dipertaruhkan di dalam hubungan. Janji-janji manis sering terkhianati dan berubah menjadi kepahitan karena kebohongan. Saya menyadari bahwa memang bukan kehilangan seseorang yang menjadikan hati terserang rasa sesakit-sakitnya, tetapi janji seorang yang dicintai pada sayalah yang menimbulkan sakit luar biasa.

About The Challenge

I’m a beginner writer in English.
This poetry to be a part of 100 Days of Poetry Challenge from @d-pend If you wondering about this challenge, please visit about 100 Days Of Poetry Challenge
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The Result

Day 18: The Bad Thing About Love

Day 19: Holes In The Chest

DAY 20: The Wound Without Blood

DAY 21: Can’t Live Alone

DAY 22: Robot

DAY 23: Steemit Is A Bridge Of Love

DAY 24: The Soul Of Poetry

DAY 25: The Angle Of Thingking