The Bubble (original poem)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Rising up slowly
Slowly rising up
Up Up Up
In a bubble

My cares are free
I never knew that I would be
Still
So still
Afraid my bubble might pop
And all that’s not
For the world to see
May truly be
Me indeed

For they never knew
The me they see
The deceit, the lies, the trouble
Never knew what life is like for me
Here inside this bubble

Neither do they care
Always hating, complaining
Quick to judge
And they tell me never to hold a grudge?

Is it fair?
Well I care
And I rise up
Up Up Up
In my bubble

My cares are free
I’m free to be me
But to them I’ll be
The me they see
The me inside the bubble

Creator: Amarie


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Awesome poem! I most definitely can relate and I am sure many others on here can to.

Hi @dohcness. Glad you enjoyed it!

Is this about you or our economy? lol. This is a great poem and you picked up a new follower. I dabble in some poetry as well. Check it out on my blog. Keep up the great writing.

Hi @walkingkeys. This poem is about what the reader beholds it to be. So, it could be about me, the economy, or someone may feel like it has stepped into their shoes. So yeah, your story poem about nuclear war is a very good read. I like the way you made it a story.

Awesome, you are a great writer. Nice work. You picked up a new follower and thank you for reading my JFK piece. I really appreciate it.

Hey, no problem and thanks to you too! Following you back.

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