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RE: Poem: "I Wish I Could Make Sense of This"
I can't pick which lines spoke to me the most because the entire poem spoke to me. I love the transition and escalation. It's beautiful in a sad sort of way :')
That's very sweet of you to say! Thanks a lot! Glad you really liked it.
I started the process of making the poem into a song. You might like this very early demo version :D
https://steemit.com/dsound/@rawbinhutt/song-in-progress-i-wish-i-could-make-sense-of-this
Fantastic! It does sound like a song lyrics. I'll check it out on my phone tonight :D
Hopefully you like it then haha :D