Poem: "I Wish I Could Make Sense of This"
Late night edgy thoughts prompted me to write this short poem. Might be the beginning of a song instead. Thought I might as well share it you. Maybe you'll enjoy it.
But sense have long been lost
I fear these are my final days
I welcome them as host
But no more I can dream
Cause only nightmares haunt my sleep
I laugh before I scream
I rather would not bow
Oh what who chose my end of days
I cannot fear you now
I can't pick which lines spoke to me the most because the entire poem spoke to me. I love the transition and escalation. It's beautiful in a sad sort of way :')
That's very sweet of you to say! Thanks a lot! Glad you really liked it.
I started the process of making the poem into a song. You might like this very early demo version :D
https://steemit.com/dsound/@rawbinhutt/song-in-progress-i-wish-i-could-make-sense-of-this
Fantastic! It does sound like a song lyrics. I'll check it out on my phone tonight :D
Hopefully you like it then haha :D
that line
Thanks a bunch! Glad you like it.
Night you suddenly Wake up from some
push in the head themselves put words in some rhymes,
form. At this point, better to sit down and lay out, adjusting on the go
doing whatever falls on the paper, buying ccannot forms and crystallizes
in line. Procrastinate not suggest:
tomorrow you won't remember what seemed so clear, thoughts will melt.
Most importantly - leave the mood in which it was written. Not going to rhyme, the brain
will cease to offer a variety of options...