Exactly. And in the grand scheme of things, those are small improvements. Your pacing, your dialog, your action balanced with dialog - all of those worked very well. I think fine-tuning a piece like this is actually fun. 😊
Exactly. And in the grand scheme of things, those are small improvements. Your pacing, your dialog, your action balanced with dialog - all of those worked very well. I think fine-tuning a piece like this is actually fun. 😊