Thanks. And I agree. I have had to edit this many times. Well, I guess that is why we are doing this... perfecting the craft with practice.
Thanks. And I agree. I have had to edit this many times. Well, I guess that is why we are doing this... perfecting the craft with practice.
Exactly. And in the grand scheme of things, those are small improvements. Your pacing, your dialog, your action balanced with dialog - all of those worked very well. I think fine-tuning a piece like this is actually fun. 😊