Steemit Open Mic Week 110 - Promesas - Original Song.
Hello Steemit!
Well , here I have a quite late Open Mic entry , I had this song idea pop up to me yesterday and I really wanted to get it out of my system.. sometimes it's a necessity hahahaha...
So , it's in a very early stage and I did a little raw production around it but i think it kind of works .. this one will get filed until I find a home for it but I wanted to share it a little with the @openmic family! @luzcypher, hope you are having fun over at SteemFest!
So , I hope you like it!
(P. Mena)
Día cambiá de color
sin buscarlo, encontró
el papel en donde
estas plumas escribieron
Las promesas para dos
que en una caja se olvidò
Que se sientan a lo largo
de esta vieja mesa
Y Se le escapa en un avión
Y volverá a la sala
que lleva sus mañanas
que es testigo de la historia
que hay en su ventana
Y Abrazará la nada
Dirá que todo cambia
serán las notas
las que viven
lo que se fue en un avión
Here is a translation
''Promises''
(P. Mena)
The day changed color
without looking, he found
the paper where
these pens once wrote
The promises for two
that in a box they forgot
That sit across
this old table
And it escapes in an airplane
And he returns to the room
that carries his mornings
and is a witness to the stories
that are in his window
And he embraces nothingness
says that everything changes
will these notes
be the one that live
those things that left on an airplane
(the translation is very hard on this one , the spanish song never specifies gender and some metaphors are lost.. oh well hahaha )
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love it @pechichemena
Thank you Paula ! thanks for stopping by for a listen :)
my pleasure
Tu música tiene algo tan especial... yo la siento tan introspectiva, tan íntima, tan cargada de significados, de historias de dolor y felicidad resumidas en pocos minutos de música. Este tipo de publicaciones son las que me hacen amar mi trabajo como curador. Es una alegría muy grande para mí decirte que propondré tu post al proyecto @celfmagazine. Un abrazo hermano!
aaah ! Miguel , tu comentario me hizo el día! te agradezco tanto las palabras.. si uno hace canciones es pata que alguien mas pueda encontrar algo en ellas .. y eso hace que haber escrito esto tenga sentido :) ! La alegría es mia de que mi música te genere algo.. te mando un gran abrazo ! Y gracias por el apoyo!
Voice of an angel! Love this song. It's done SO besutifully 💜💜💜🙏💜 what a great resteem @paulag oh i love original music! Thank-you!!
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@yogajill thank you so much of the sweet words :) !! I'm glad you liked the song , it was put together rather quick ! happy it came out ok hehehe
Such a beautiful song!!
thank you very much @clove71 ! I'm happy you liked it :)
This is lovely - made me smile
thank you so much @sazzler ! glad to hear from you :) ! it's been a while :D
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Thank you Luz!
You're crushin' it, brother...
This is off the charts, man...
Nice!
Thank you very much brother ! glad that you are back btw :) ! Cheers!!
Great raw idea blooming into another classic bro
I have added you to my Official Open Mic Judge‘s List for Week 110.
Please read full review here.
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-110-original-blog
Thank you very much bro! will hop on and read :) !
Beautiful song brother ! So well executed and arranged ! You got me with the backing harmonies at the end of the chorus - se fue en un avión part ! * bathing in a sea of silk * hahaha
thank you brother ! I'm glad you liked it :) .. just some production tricks over the vocals ;) .. Fabfilter MB on a bus.. and you bring them together like a key pad .. hahaha It's kind of addictive!
This was beautiful @pechichemena
The moment your fingers touched the strings, chills ran down my spine. So much feeling, and amazing production. I'm blown away, great job brother!
ooooh! thank you so much @futuremind ! that's the best compliment a songwriter can get :) ! I'm so glad you liked it ! .. I might have a reason to work it a little more then ;) ! Cheers!