Steemit Open Mic Week 59 - At all (Original song)

in #openmic7 years ago

I'm back with an original. I shortly considered recording a harmony over it but then decided to leave it raw and real as always. I just feel like black and white these days.

Do you know this feeling when you question everything? This song is about being the answer to that question.
All is art. There's nothing but art. A(r)t all.

Sometimes I'm wondering if this is real
or if we are all an illusion
and while I am breaking my head there's this feeling
that it doesn't matter
at all

Sometimes I'm wondering
if it makes a difference
what if I would have listened
to that breathtaking voice without words

voice without...

But sometimes wondering
is just out of my reach
and whatever thought has haunted me
I myself ordered to teach

And whatever edge I've stranded on
is my very beach
My frequency is dancing on
the waves of this...

Sometimes I'm wondering
if this is real
or if we are all an illusion
And while it is breaking my heart
there's this feeling
that it doesn't matter
at all

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Yeeeey!!! Thank you so much!

Congratulations @melavie! Click the image to see the post.

Wow. This is AMAZING. Love the voice and love the song. What a beautiful atmosphere. WOW.

Such a perfect song to listen to at 1am

Yes I guess my genre is pastmidnight candlelight music. :) Thank you for listening and appreciating!

such a beautiful song... i think I've played it 4 times today already... sooo good....

Thank you so much! Happy that you like it! What a beautiful compliment!

Your voice cuts like a knife, there's also a lot of hope in it!
Keep singing and writing beautiful songs please.

I will! Thank you for your words!

Great original song!
Upvoted and resteemed!

Thanks a lot!

Good to see you back. I missed you. Beautiful song.

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Thank you!!!

Uh-Oh… your reference to “is it just an illusion” has brought to the fore another of my “Songs from the Attic.”

Perhaps one of these weeks I will brush it off and share it with the community.

Until then, your original composition here simply overwhelms anything that I could possibly dig out of my attic from the past.

What a deeply touching and beautiful performance… I loved this @melavie!

Thank you so much for the appreciation! Your words make me happy and humble.
Looking forward to hear your song!!

Thank you, @melavie! After your performance here, I think I'll need to wait several weeks before even attempting to showcase my past endeavors. But when/if I do, I will be certain to link to your post as a source of inspiration! Bless you, girl!

wow! spectacular .

Wow! Thank you!

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Beautiful song!

Thank you for listening! :)

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