Steemit Openmic week 70- "Love"- dominiqueguitars (original song)

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

Hello guys, it feels so good to be back on again, haven missed two consecutive weeks.. Through those weeks i was so sad knowing that i couldn't join in the Openmic contest because i had no guitar.. So i doubled up and I'm glad to announce to y'all the arrival of my baby girl MONIQUE(my guitar)..
And during the period of guitar drought I took up the challenge of writing a song of my own (this I'm not so good at) ... it wasn't an easy one though, but thank God i was able to come up with something I'm seriously hoping y'all would like,and encourage me to keep the fire burning..
##Special thanks to @luzcypher ..@pfunk and the host of others for sustaining this contest... I dedicate this song to you guys, because u gave me the drive to pull this together... Thanks once again!!!

LOVE- @dominiqueguitars
(Lyrics)

When it all began
I never knew we would get this far
I was not so sure
But now, I am

I never believed
This beauty I saw
Walking down the road
Would be mine

Again and again I'm gonna tell it to the whole world
Just what you mean to me
And how you make me feel

Chorus
This thing called LOVE
Has taken over me
I'm losing my mind
And it's all because of yo'
Come, run to me
And let me know you feel this way too
So I won't lose my mind
Just knowing I got yo'

V2
They say that everything is fair in love and war
Though love's not a fight
But I will fight for yo'

I know I could hurt
Yet I give you my all
O baby
This is how you know
What I feel for yo' is true

Chorus:
This thing called LOVE
Has taken over me
I'm losing my mind
And it's all because of yo'
Come, run to me
And let me know you feel this way too
So I won't lose my mind
Just knowing I got yo'

Come, run to me
And let me know you feel this way too
So I won't lose my mind
Just knowing I got yo'

Hook:
Oh baby
Come to me
And we'll be together till the morning comes

End.

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Really beautiful song and your voice gave it the perfect feeling for the song.

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Beautiful composition and performance, brother!

Thank you sir @passion-ground..
I consider this a great honour and opportunity to learn and get better @it.. Thanks again sir!

We can't just get enough of you dom, love is a beautiful thing however i wish you would play more often for the church @steemchurch!

😊😊
Thanks man!
N of course it will be my pleasure playing some more for the steemchurch

Thank you much @luzcypher
Your effort in bringing musicians to wine and dine in one accord is highly commendable and inspiring too

Dominic the boss .. Your playing skill is second to none.. Very beautiful song bro

Thanks a lot @langford
You give great hope man

Hi Dominique. I'm glad you have your guitar now.
This is a beautiful song - melody, lyrics, and performance.
It's a pleasant surprise that you're a talented songwriter too.
So continue writing and playing new songs. You're awesome.

P.S. The background is a bit noisy XD It disrupts your beautiful music.

Thank you!
Thank you!
Thank you @jazzhero
You always here to help me go beyond limits
I'll definitely be more mindful of the background noise subsequently..
Thanks again!

Congrats man! I just saw the open mic results just now.
Told ya this was a beautiful song and performance.
I'm glad you updated the video.
This version is much better without the background noise haha
Compose and sing and play more. You are awesome.

Thank you so much @jazzhero
I had to listen to ur advise.. nothing like following one who knows d way..
I'll do jst as you have said... cheers boss!

I don't think you noticed, but I had mentioned you in my top list for last week, week 70, really nice original song and you have a great singing voice @dominiqueguitars, check the full review of my posts here below.

https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-70-original-blog

I have just released my week 71 list as well if you want to check it out as well.

https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-71-original-blog

Oh Dear!
I'm so sorry bout this @verbal-d...I'm just seeing this now... I'm so clicking on the links to see for myself and will soon share a link to my week 72 post...
Thanks a lot!

More more more and more.
I love to see my brothers grow up.
Congratulations bro.

Nice and better now you will make top 5 ,bruh watch and see

Thanks man!
I like being @my best
And hope to get better

So remember when I said you was gonna make top 5 well you did meeting us at the top with 2nd position welldone bruh. Up Dominique up utopians we shine anywhere we are. Clear road for you. Lool

Thanks broda
U d best man
Thanks for ur advise too

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