Steemit Open Mic Week 48 - An Original Song Fragment in DADEAD tuning (guitar)

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Steemit, I am only playing you the first two movements of an old trilogy song tonight. The first movement is called "Looking Glass" and the second movement is called "Falling Down". Ask me nicely and I might play the final movement as a stand-alone entry in a future open mic contest - the final movement is called "Microscope Eye" and is about the same length as the first two movements combined; Microscope Eye has an interesting structure switching back and forth from 4/4 time in the verse to 7/8 in the chorus and is a little bit more "jammy".

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Observe the amazing lighting and wonderful production values I have brought to the table this week! Folks one day I swear I will find this magical wormhole to a perfect moment and have the time to record an Open Mic take in the daylight in a nice setting... until then I am fitting y'all in where and when I can. Thing One and Thing Two keep me busy

Looking Glass - lyrics


He looked through the looking glass
He looked through the looking glass
The masquerade was over, so he took off his mask

He stepped through the looking portal
the teleportal
he felt immortal

He smoked out on the grass
He smoked out on the grass

He wondered if this was all it took
To scrub out the writing from the book
He thought that his time had come to pass
He thought that the world had crashed at last

You and I know we know each other
As we look within
You can take off those outer layers
You can show some sin

And the world turns around
And the world turns around
Can you hear without a sound?
Can you rise without a down?

He's screaming because he isn't heard
His lips move but he can't make a word
His path has broken from the herd
Set off on a journey without end

Falling Down - lyrics


Back and forth like a seesaw, a mind is an ever changing thing
Who can say when its made up, 'cause its all made up anyway

Easing out on the tightrope must be the hardest thing to do
All the noise of the circus
And all eyes
Looking
Up
At
You...

Couldn't take the heat, and wouldn't walk away
Didn't take the high road, and wouldn't sink below
Didn't stop for reason, and wouldn't wait for fear

Falling
I'm falling
falling down

Follow me
I'm falling
Follow me down

Art Explosion Contest!


Hey if I still have your attention way down here below my video and song lyrics in the post, please check out my friend @juliakponsford's art contest! My experience leads me to suspect there is a pretty decent overlap between the "musician" and the "artist" types, and that is probably doubly true of the "music lover" and "art lover" types. Check out the Art Explosion Contest - this is week 6 and the theme is "Surrealism" for a 30 SBD prize (the gates are still open errybuddy so let the strange rip).

Bit of shameless self promotion - I have an entry in the Art Explosion contest this week as well - check it out!

Guitar Talk - DADEAD alternate tuning


I am playing tonight in my favorite alternate tuning (but not the only alternate tuning I have spent time in - check this weird one out for an example!). DADEAD, in addition to having a great name (Da Dead tuning), gives you some interesting chord voicings while allowing you to riff easily on the three highest strings if you want to play lead (these are all five half steps apart - so any riff you could play on the lowest three strings in standard tuning you can transpose onto the highest strings in this tuning). The strange part is of course the single whole step interval between the second D string and the E string - you have to see it coming if you are playing a run across the 3rd and 4th strings while improvising or you will mangle it. The sound of the open strings is shimmery in a dissonant way that evokes a minor chord without actually being a minor chord. Here is a decent instrumental clip of me playing a DADEAD progression to get a sense of what you can do in the tuning.

At one point I left my main guitar in DADEAD tuning for almost two years and wrote and played exclusively in this tuning. I have a ton of songs in DADEAD. Nowadays I leave my secondary axe (trusty ole Yamaha) in this tuning. I can tell that I need to play my Yamaha more often - its action is a lot higher than the Gretsch I usually play and my fingers felt like mud on it. Lots of buzzing notes from not-quite-strong-and-precise-enough finger placements and lots of not-quite slides - in retrospect I probably should have just de-tuned my Gretsch :)

See ya next time Steemit!



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Carl, your voice in “Falling Down,” which I love btw, to my ear, is a bit reminiscent of James Taylor. I loved both of these songs! Your guitar is every bit as sweet as your voice! And thanks for all of the custom tuning tips – I’ve never explored that realm, but after reading your description, I now have to get around to doing just that at some point in the future.

And yes, by all means, I hereby humbly request that you kindly grace us with “Microscope Eye” to complete this brilliant trilogy. There ain’t nuthin’ quite like that “third movement” if you know what I mean. (he,he)

PS Nice Shirt! (Ha)

PSS I realize that in being such a great Dad, and all else that you likely do - that your time is limited, so here’s a quick production tip to help you get more mileage out of your great songs. I don’t think anyone would arrest or disqualify you if you made two separate entry videos here (in the same “undisclosed” location, and with the same shirt on – or not. LOL) One for this week, and then one for next – you could then just sit on next week’s until the time comes to post it as a new official entry. Just keep your week numbers straight. With these “two-movements,” you should be good-to-go, while getting a lot more mileage from this new pair of sneakers. – lol – Cheers!

Awww thanks @passion-ground - I have received the James Taylor comparison before and there is certainly nothing wrong with that! High praise :) I have written literally hundreds and hundreds of songs, not too worried about extending mileage! ... unless you are saying this entry was too long? Which may be valid - five minutes is a fairly long time to ask for someone's attention in this day and age I suppose :) Cheers - Carl

Nah, this was not too long at all! Just a selfish suggestion to raise the odds of me getting to hear you play each and every week without missing a beat. I could listen to an extended-play album of yours in a heartbeat!

Hey @passion-ground, taking you at your word here that you actually enjoy hearing me sing and play - here is a link to a song I just posted :)
https://steemit.com/music/@carlgnash/sound-advice-original-song-dgdfgd-tuning

I most certainly do Carl! That one seems a bit older as your beard wasn't quite as long - maybe even a really long time ago? Anyway, I upvoted and left you this comment:

"This is great Carl! The lyrics are poignant, the melody unique, and your performance, splendid!"

December of 2008 so yeah... almost a decade - guess that does count as a really long time ago! The contest this week got me thinking about some other tunings I used to play in, which brought that song to mind. Thanks for checking it out and the kind words! Much love - Carl

Nice song carl! I also think I spotted a very cool beard there in the darkness 😀 best of luck in the comp!

Thansk @juliakonsford! It takes a PRETTY dark video to hide my beard... that sucker is getting big! My beard is going on 14 months old now :)

Wow it's almost all grown up :)

yeah it is just starting to talk. Yesterday I swear it said "Da da" :)

great song man, followed and upvoted. I also used to be a dungeon master.

Dungeon Masters of the World - UNITE!

👏👏👏👏 love your stuff mate! Keep it coming. 👍😉

Nice song man, I tried that tuning with my guitar as well!

Thanks! Followed you - hope to hear some of that guitar! :)

yeah man definitely in the next months though

Yo Carl good song, good playing good voice amazing beard I would actually put this on my playlist and enjoy it everytime.

Thanks @vachemorte! Those are kind words. And my beard says, "Heyyyy"

You've got some great chords with that tuning. I particularly liked 'Looking Glass', very original sounding.

Thanks Andy!

I really liked the high arpeggio type bit after these lyrics.

He wondered if this was all it took
To scrub out the writing from the book

Nice work my friend

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