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RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!
Here's my third review - Lordless - Be a bounty hunter
https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@tfame3865/lordless-be-a-bounty-hunter-b4a67c327f177
Old Tweet
https://twitter.com/tualety49/status/1093446972281901056?s=19
@mids106, i have edited the twitter post. I was told to remove stateofthedapps from the beginning, i have done that now. Thanks
new tweet
Thanks for your corrections and the new review!
In your article you use a LOT of bullet points, pretty much every paragraph is a bullet point. I would use regular paragraphs instead most of the time. This is friendlier to read, and when you do use a bullet point list it will make more impact, as you haven't overused it.
My meta review score: 🏞️🏞️🏞️
wow, am happy i improved. Thanks @mids106, For the positive review 💪. I love using the bullet as it makes my work kind off beautiful lol. Will stop using it or will limit it