Foxtails Writing Contest: With an Infinite Loop

in #metzli7 years ago (edited)

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She lay in the immersion tank not wondering about anything or anyone. Her different personalities flashed through her mind like advertisements on television. Tiny little stories, where the characters are kind of face less. She wondered if she was ready to pick a personality. At least she knew she was a she. Sometimes she didn’t know. And she also knew that she had done this before. The more she thought about it the more she knew. It was obvious she was a woman, her senses knew that much. She touched her hair. Long, strong, heavy. Youth, she was a youthful female. She sighed and let her mind go blank. This was the toughest part of her journey. She let herself touch her face (high cheekbones), her neck (slender), strong shoulders, breasts (of course), she stopped at her navel. Why wasn’t it strong? Why was it so wide? Why did it feel lumpy? She panicked as she moved her hands towards her behind. Why did it feel like plastic? She sighed and lay in the immersion tank, not wondering about anything or anyone. She was obvious not ready to make a decision.


This was my response to @vermillionfox's one paragraph story contest based on the image presented.

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'the immersion tank'

I love the concept. Is she even someone or she is just someone else's creation and she's now becoming self-aware.

Funny, I'm still thinking about this and creating theories of my own.

Thanks for stopping by. I pictured her as a person with multiple personalities trying to figure out who she is.

It's an interesting idea to put the story in one paragraph)

That was the challenge. It was a fun one.

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