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RE: The Stream -- The Canvas [vol. 2]
Some nice alliterative play here! I love the words 'fledgling' and 'dithering' - great verbs.
Some nice alliterative play here! I love the words 'fledgling' and 'dithering' - great verbs.
thanks @riverflows :) I tend to slip into alliterations while writing stream of consciousness. I like the musicality of it. Thanks for commenting. I don't know why I didn't see this earlier.. something was going on with my Partiko. I haven't been getting notifications.
Feel free to check out some of my other stuff when you have the time.
Oh, thatnsk for eventually getting back to me! I love the rhythm of alliteration as well. Words to me have an inherent rhythm - I like to speak my work aloud to see if it 'flows' in that way, but these days I 'hear' it on the inside as I write. I bookmarked your link so I can - and likewise, would love you to read some of my stuff - coincidentally, just did an archive post today!
yes, exactly! I definitely 'hear' the words in my mind as im writing them.. the sounds can help to set the mood that I am trying to create. I will be stopping by your blog. I look forward having a read of your archive post!
Cheers!