Write a Poem for You---My handwritten copy of the poem #20: We are Looking for a Lamp 为你写诗--我的手抄诗歌#20: 我们去寻找一盏灯

in #life7 years ago (edited)

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Life is not about how to live through the storm, but how to dance in the rain.

生活不是如何度过暴风雨,而是如何学会在雨中起舞。


It's time to introduce a poem to you. It's also about life. Have you ever thought what can be considered as a lamp in your mind? As for me, home is the lamp in my mind. Today, I want to share with you this poem We are Looking for a Lamp written by Gu Cheng.

又到了给大家推荐诗歌的时间了。这次和开篇句照应,是关于人生的。你们有没有想过在自己的心里何为一盏灯?对我而言,家是我心里的一盏明灯。今天给大家分享的是《我们去寻找一盏灯》,作者顾城。

The original text 原文


我们去寻找一盏灯

走了那么远
我们去寻找一盏灯

你说
它在窗帘后面
被纯白的墙壁围绕
从黄昏迁来的野花
将变成另一种颜色

走了那么远
我们去寻找一盏灯

你说
它在一个小站上
注视着周围的荒草
让列车静静驰过
带走温和的记忆

走了那么远
我们去寻找一盏灯

你说
它就在大海旁边
像金桔那么美丽
所有喜欢它的孩子
都将在早晨长大

走了那么远
我们去寻找一盏灯

Translation version 译本


We are Looking for a Lamp

Having walked that far
We are looking for a lamp

You say
It is behind the curtains
Surrounded by white walls
Wildflowers picked from the evening
Will turn into another color

Having walked that far
We are looking for a lamp

You say
It is on a small stop
Watching the surrounding grass
Let the train speed by quietly
Taking the sweet memory away

Having walked that far
We are looking for a lamp

You say
It is at the seaside
Looking as beautiful as a kumquat
All the kids who like it
Will grow up in the morning

Having walked that far
We are looking for a lamp


The following is my handwritten copy for this poem.

以下是我的手抄本。

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When I first read this poem, I was a undergraduate. I had been reading it for several times until I completely understood what the author wanted to express. I appreciate its style, like the sentence in this poem—It is on a small stop,watching the surrounding grass. Let the train speed by quietly, taking the sweet memory away. This makes up a picture. A kid stands on the side of the railway, watching the old green-colored train slowly pass until the train completely disappeared. What is described in the poem is nice, accompanied by a lamp, which added to its warmness. It's no wonder that this kind of poem written by Gu Cheng is full of childish and fancy atmosphere.

《我们去寻找一盏灯》第一次看见这首诗是大学的时候,连续读了好几遍,很喜欢它的风格。“它在一个小站上,注视着周围的荒草,让列车静静驰过”,这句诗让我想到一副很天然的画面:一个小孩站在铁道边注视着老式绿皮火车缓缓经过,直到火车完全消失。诗中描述的情景都是美好的,再伴随着一盏灯,又增添了不少温暖的感觉,怪不得说诗人顾城早期的诗富有孩子般的纯幼风格、梦幻情绪。


If you have your favorite poem, you can recommend it to me. This kind of post will be updated irregularly and I hope you can continue to support. Thanks! (PS: The English version is translated by @mrspointm)

如果你有喜欢的诗歌,可以推荐给我,我为大家手抄诗歌。这一系列将不定期更新,希望大家继续支持,谢谢! (注:英文译文来自 @mrspointm,仅为文章需要。)


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    Full of hopeful poem, excellent translation and nice handwriting. I also rather like poems and I wrote poems sometimes too~

    I'm so glad that you like it. Wow, I really appreciate whoever can write poems! It's awesome!👏

    手抄诗很有创意啊,每首诗都可以演变成一个故事,等待邂逅。。。

    同意你的观点,每首诗歌都是一个小故事。之前一直在写,后来时间紧就不定期更新,还是想坚持抄下去。😄

    诗歌翻译得不错👍

    谢谢你啊😂

    你的字写得真棒。

    谢谢😊 其实很普通

    真的很棒,现在能把字也得漂亮的人越来越少了。。。

    好久不见妹子的手抄诗啦

    是的,姐,因为我每次找诗歌都会先去看看是否有英文版,选材上就会有很多局限性,索性这次的诗就自己翻译。😂

    最後燈就在不經意間以不同形式出現在我們心中(覺得自己有詩意😂)

    我也觉得你这句很有诗意,(^o^)/~

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