I Wish I Knew (day 29)
I wish my eyes learned how to cry,
I wish my heart learned how to love,
But no matter how hard I try,
Feelings are difficult to have.
To be Human sounds hard to me
Why can't I be happy or sad?
They say life's real. I cannot see
What's nice in it nor what is bad.
Something is missing, what could it be?
Something is lost, and I can't tell
If I am ever breaking free
from my cold emotional cell
Where I've lived—where I grew.
What and where could be the key?
I wish I learned. I wish I knew
Whether we all do, or it's just me.
This is my Day 29 of @d-pend's 100 Day Poetry Challenge. You can visit Steemit School on discord if you want to learn more about it or if you want to join our daily poetry lesson.
Edited a day later after receiving the critics in the poetry class.
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All learning comes in the right moment if you are open to it. If you are not, the only thing you are left with is regret.
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Oh wow , this one is your best one yet !
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Really beautiful and thought provoking as well as a very honest poem. Thank you @hazem91
^_^ thanks #robertandrew
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Exactly how I feel right now. It seems like the more we know the more we feel we don't know. Beautiful lines sir.
^_^ thank you
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What's nice in it nor what is bad.
I think a comma between 'it' and 'nor' may have helped a little.
I imagined AI longing to be Human as I read your piece.
This is such a great expression about feelings, about being a lost soul. I read it and re read it. Very moving for me. Thank you
Thank you ^^