"KILL THE PAD" WINNERS WEEK #1 - SPONSORED BY STEEM MUSIC ALLIANCE

in #killthepad6 years ago (edited)


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What is Kill The Pad Challenge?

Kill The Pad challenge is a bi-weekly topical text based rap competition for SBD. Why am I starting a text based rap initiative? We have many creative writers in the hip hop community. One doesn't have to get onto the mic to show their prowess with lyricism. This will benefit the less experienced and the more experienced alike. Topicals are always a good exercise. It's all about elevating together, learning from each other, and growing as an artist.

IF YOU ARE A RAPPER, WRITER, OR POET THEN YOU SHOULD PARTICIPATE! LET'S HONE OUR SKILLS AND BECOME BETTER ARTISTS TOGETHER!



This challenge is sponsored by the SMA. If you are a musician, singer, song writer, rapper, or musically inclined in any way, head over there and connect with other musicians! An invite button is at the bottom of the post.




Thank you to everyone who entered.

@verbal-d @bulleth @mitchelljaworski @deadeversince @simgirl @the21plus @papaholdonez

The turn out was amazing for the first week!! I was able to leave most of you guys a detailed review. Let's get on to the winners!

1st place - 4 SBD + 20 points in the Steem Music League

@verbal-d

His entry

Very cool verse, very smooth. Great rhyme scheme. Although I did get distracted by the gifs and memes at first, when I pointed that out, he quickly changed his post to make it more streamlined. That's a true entertainer, professional, etc. Take the constructive criticism and do something with it, I like that a lot. Much love to @verbal-d for showing out for the competition and doing his thing!! The first ever #killthepad winner!! Wooot!

2nd place - 2 SBD + 15 points in the Steem Music League

@deadeversince

His entry

Possibly my favorite in the entire competition. Was only SLIGHTLY behind verbal in overall score. The reason why verbal got it his he did have a better rhyme scheme, however, man this verse goes in. The imagery is on point, I mean from the very beginning

Every time my alarm sounds i swear there's enemies at my door
I wake up in confusion like i've been drafted to go to war

Wake up ready to go to war when the alarm goes off? Paints a nice picture for you. It's raw emotion and I dig that 100%. Keep this stuff coming man, you fucking rock!

3rd place - 1 SBD + 10 points in the Steem Music League

@bulleth

His entry

This one had a nice rap scheme, and easy to follow structure. I could literally hear it being rapped as I was reading it, which is always a plus. Only reason he didn't get higher is because I know he can do better than this verse, lol.





Other stuff

While everyone has their own styles, and I understand that, part of challenges is trying to see what the judges are looking for and going with it. I would suggest that if you are truly interested in becoming a better lyricist when it comes to rap, read the winners entries every week. Go to the different entries from this week or past weeks, and look at my critiques. I give valuable tips and information out each week to different people, and that information might be different than what I gave you.

ALSO
If you want to help pick the topic for tomorrows challenge then you need to go onto the SMA DISCORD server, a link is below. Once on there just head over to the challenge section and put what topic you want in the #killthepad challenge section.

Hope everyone enjoyed this week's theme, can't wait to see what you come with for the next challenge.

WEEK 2 STARTS TOMORROW!!

Get those pens and pads ready!





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Gonna have to stoke the fire for next round!! hahaha Congrats to Verbal D and bulleth. Props to everyone who competed! Best of luck in the upcoming challenges!

Hell yea dude, can't wait to see what you're going to bring next... If you want to throw your hat in the ring for coming up with tomorrow topic, head onto the SMA Discord channel and go to the #killthepad challenge area. Just put whatever topic you want there for tomorrow.

I will do some brainstorming and do that for sure!

Didn't get a chance to get in on this one. Had to much going on! I am ready for the one tomorrow and I look forward to get a read on all the ones from this one!!

this is dope! i wanna jump in on the next round! i am in on all the other challenges and just found this one, just now! good stuff!

Thanks for checking it out! Hope to see you next time around. I will be posting the next challenge tomorrow.

i will keep my eye out for it! thanks

Sweet, has already been posted!

i see i see. i wil jumps!

definitely will enter again! Cannot wait for next week!

Sweet man, can't wait!! Will be posting the next topic/challenge tomorrow!

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