Remainders in Tattooed
Consumed by hell fire of desires
The thoughts of you hinders my vision
Deprive my deafening silence at night
As it burns ablaze our passion
But eventually fades to fumes of greed
Won't dive to its booze
When integrity still stood firm
A maven and I am naive
Anxiety leads my despair
For I am true from what I felt
Pessimist leads me here
Because I know it won't be clear
Like a delusion from my fantasy
I don't want to be stuck eternally
A convict of malice, am I or not?
Judge me as I concede
But I suppose it's the best for us
Remainders of you tattooed my mind
Seems irrevocable and embedded
Like a dreadful history that tainted people's mind
Should I cherish it or perish?
Here's my complete list of my poems
Feel free to read, thank you!
love dàvid
| List | ||
|---|---|---|
| Greatest Solace | Idle Soul | Euphoria (Sonnet) |
| Game Pattern | Meeting Point | As the Sun Descends |
| Queen | Ardor | Sunset and Gold |
| Holy Ground | 999 Days of Chastity | Chasing the Lights |
| Inaudible Ravage | Light-years |
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I really liked the last line. It had a great rhythm to it, and I felt that it conveyed the sentiment of the poem well. Good write.
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