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Also, if you expect some payouts, you'll need to put more effort into formatting your posts properly. As it is now, it does not read well. But don't worry, all of us here have gone through this path - a bit of learning is required.
Thanks! I feel comletely like a rookie. But I do want to get better. The only way to learn is to keep trying.