It's also adviseful to use #introduceyourself tag for your introduction post, that way it would get more attention. You can check out other introduction posts there and try to figure out the way it's working best, also there is never a guarantee of success . You could do a bilingual post, like that one
https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@marina007/hello-i-am-newbie-vsem-privet-ya-novyi-uchastnik