RE: The story of life and learning the value contained in it #wewrite
Hello I am dissatisfied with the way you graded this post, on what basis did you give me a 4 out of 10?
Is it because in the story above you didn't find both answers to the assignment? Or because you didn't read it at all.
Note: It doesn't matter if a short story, a poem or an article is written but if we want to make our text attractive we should add a "dose of us". This can be a personal anekdote, a joke or be done by describing what we see or feel and to do that we can use a single word as well.
I hope, as a good teacher, you have to explain what is missing and what needs to be improved?
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The question asked is:
Both you did not do.
So you misunderstood what was asked and it did not went good so no points.
Title: Your titel is not an eyecatcher, not inviting enough to click if it shows up in a long list of articles (compare it with all the titles of contests and the diary game) also think how newspapers try to attract your attention with what we call "a clickbait".
Hashtags: you did not use the hashtags as mentioned in Lesson 1- task 1 - result no points
Although you did not follow the rules, your title is not inviting and you wrote something completely else I gave you 3 points for a flashy start. 3 although 2 is the maximum... which makes me think this is wrong and I should edit it.
Creativity/out of the box thinking: 1 point
Following the rules: no points (you did not follow the rules, you did not describe the picture, describe your feelings and did not use the right hashtags.
So the points you received are for a flashy start (although you wrote the wrong) text and 1 for the creativity.
Here I can understand you cannot find the answer to the task given in the content of the story that has been written.well I try to help you to highlight one picture.
answer I have explained in the sentence "On the way they sang together happily
I wrote it in a short story,so do you still think I didn't answer the assignment?l
Title: unattractive to you doesn't mean unattractive to others, so it's a personal point of view.
hashtags: I used the hashtag #wewrite01 and #creativewriting, do I have to use all five hashtags mentioned.