A night without control.

in WORLD OF XPILAR4 years ago (edited)

A storm lit up the dawn of that young walker, the zigzagging of the lightning produced shadows around him, he was standing there, with no reason or energy to move, he was dismayed at what he had experienced during the night.


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It was a party full of debauchery, the young people were unbridled by music, alcohol and herbs, a wild and uncontrolled night lived at that time, Joseph with his girlfriend shared pleasantly the drinks of beers and some special cigarettes, those that cloud the mind and make the mind fly to an unstable world. The music was burning, heavy rock was testing the hearing of the young people present, everything was slow but aggressive.

Amidst all the excitement and vigor, Jose's girlfriend accidentally joins a young man and they are left hugging between the wall. Jose only noticed the moment when they were hugging and became enraged, his mind full of alcohol and narcotics giving way to unbridled madness. Jose took a bottle and advanced towards the young man who unfortunately hugged his girlfriend, hitting her on the head with a strong blow. Everyone noticed José's action and began to hit each other. The liquor bottles became the ideal weapons of the occasion.

Everything got out of control, Jose, kept attacking the young man while his girlfriend lay confused on the floor, she was just high and out of her mind, she could not coordinate her body to get up and stand up. Joseph, after having dangerously wounded the young man, took his fury with whom he had started everything, according to him, took a piece of glass and began to attack his girlfriend.


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Bloody, Joseph leaves the place as he can, under the rain he begins to run without reason, his tears are confused with the water of the rain but his pain and anger is completely evident, affected by what had happened he dives into a group of trees in the middle of the night, standing and thinking for a long time.

The rain manages to lessen the effects of the drugs and alcohol, gradually recovering his senses and his reason. Joseph realizes the amount of blood that stains his clothes and falls to his knees, -what have I done, -he cries out desperately.

He doesn't remember if he managed to kill her or if he simply wounded her, he ran away, but in the middle of the road, a police car called out to him. Jose stopped, and screaming asked, "Why are you stopping me? The police officers got out and handcuffed Jose, answering, "We don't know yet, but it must be serious.

José was mounted in the patrol car, the police radio was listening to the order to search the place well, two dead people were lying on the track, the bodies of two young unidentified girls were found bloody, the patrol car that was taking José stopped at that place, but José could not see his girlfriend among the people grouped in the outskirts, he began to cry disconsolately because he thought that he was the cause of the possible death of his beloved girlfriend.

This is my publication to participate in the contest of @rashia and #Knitrias-Project.


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Hola, me gusto mucho tu historia, con un toque de realidad, puesto que es una experiencia que cualquiera de nosotros puede vivir. Gracias por compartir, suerte en el concurso. Abrazos

 4 years ago 

Muchas gracias por visitar mi puesto amiga @isabellta. Así es, siempre busco darle algo de realidad a mis historias.

Estuvo atrapante de principio a fin, la culpa es un peso inimaginable ante quien no sabe lo que hizo en pleno descontrol frenético que fue impulsado por un acto indecoro.


Mucho éxitos en el concurso, espero leer más y saber que ocurrió luego de que Joseph estuviera devastado en la patrulla.

 4 years ago 

Así es amigo @jacorv, hoy en día los jóvenes se envuelven en este mundo de locura y después no tienen la madurez para afrontar las consecuencias.

Coincido con tu pensar!

Excellent narrative, @AdelJose!! It touches all the senses and emotions!
Thanks for participate in the Short Story Contest!!

Best winds for projects and life!!

 4 years ago 

Gracias por la visita y apoyo @knitrias

Wow, what an intense story you have created @Adeljose. Your narrative is amazing, you get swept up by the suspense and his emotions. Amazing story!

Good job! :D

 4 years ago 

I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you very much for your attention.

No need to thank me. Thank you for participating and writing such a great story 😁

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