Welcome to Steemit @mzubairali,

You have not made a good introductory post.

The Title is wrong, You are writing about achievement 1 and title is about achievement 2.

For Achievement 1,

You need to write about yourself more. Like your education background, what you are currently doing in life, what are your interests, how much do you know about Crypto etc.

Here is the list of all the achievement Tasks compiled by cryptokannon
https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@cryptokannon/achievement-tasks-resources-and-materials-newcomers-retention

Here is the achievement 1 Task Guidelines
https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@cryptokannon/achievement-1-mentor-by-cryptokannon-verification-through-introduction

Moreover, As you are from Pakistan So I advise you to join the Steemit Pakistan community. You will learn many things from senior members as well as you will get support from the community if you are active.

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