Purple Witch, Defense against Evil

william8wayward (60)in Freewriters • 5 years ago (edited)

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5 years ago in Freewriters by william8wayward (60)

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owasco (67) 5 years ago

I am verklempt!
and hope you never see
how unkempt
I truly be

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william8wayward (60) 5 years ago (edited)

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owasco (67) 5 years ago

hahahahaha!

A good name for a kosher instant ramen soup!!!!!

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owasco (67) 5 years ago

I have to stop playing now. Stupid dog is stupid sick and I have to take said stupid dog to an even stupider vet. But it's been real...

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william8wayward (60) 5 years ago (edited)

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juichi (73) 5 years ago

You're such a good poet man!

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william8wayward (60) 5 years ago (edited)

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owasco (67) 5 years ago

I prolly won't post this here, but I thought you should know...

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cliffagreen (61) 5 years ago

Minnesota and New York aren't that far apart. ... I think this has a great tone for a modern love poem. It expresses genuine feeling, yet the poet seems to be self-conscious of that feeling. I see a sardonic tone in the second-to-last stanza, a sense that 'isn't this lovey dovey thing kind of ridiculous'. I think that works very well to make the genuine feeling more believable. As opposed to the unfettered passion of, say, a Shakespearean sonnet, which no modern reader would buy. Obviously, if the object of affection loves the poem, that's the real barometer of success! I think she did.

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william8wayward (60) 5 years ago (edited)

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cliffagreen (61) 5 years ago

Dune by Frank Herbert. First time through. Before that I was rereading the Gap series by Stephen R. Donaldson. So I guess you can tell I'm into SciFi. Though Dune has a nice mix of science fiction and fantasy.

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william8wayward (60) 5 years ago (edited)

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cliffagreen (61) 5 years ago

I highly recommend the Gap series. The story takes off and doesn't relent through all five books.

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william8wayward (60) 5 years ago (edited)

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cliffagreen (61) 5 years ago

Okay. I'm starting a new job today so I'll look at it tonight.

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haikubot (54) 5 years ago

Okay. I'm starting
A new job today so I'll
Look at it tonight.

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