Three Suspects One Killer

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A Crime Story

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Mr. Thomas was having doubts that his new trick might not favour him, he was so desperate to earn alot of money at once then leave the city once his mission gets accomplished. Before now Mr. Thomas is a drug dealer with alot of friends and few enemies but we never can tell when his friends will turn out to be his enemies as well. Mr. Thomas abandoned father and husband who will never change, his family left him three years ago because of how dangerous he is.

Andrew a very thin tall man was so passionate about his money and drugs, he trusted Mr. Thomas but he didn't get to understand why Mr. Thomas began to act mischievous all of a sudden. Andrew sold expensive drugs to Mr. Thomas but didn't get paid immediately and was given alot of time to pay the money since he trust the man alot.

Days turned to weeks and weeks turned to months, Mr. Thomas was still owing Andrew.The new trick Mr. Thomas had was to convince his youngest disciples Gad to invest his mother's money in an unforseen business. Gad agreed because he trusted Mr. Thomas so much and he informed his mum about it.

There wasn't enough money so Mrs. Jane who is Gad's mum had to sell her expensive car to give the money to Mr. Thomas. Gad was so excited that his mum sold her car to get the money and he convinced her that they will triple amount of it once the deal is over. Three months later Gad's mum asked him why she haven't received the huge amount of money yet, the deal was supposed to last for 2 months.

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Gad was also confused and he also developed hatred for Mr. Thomas because the man framed him which led to his arrest. Gad was released after 4 months and he openly threatened to kill Mr. Thomas. Andrew was always a patient dog and he lost control and met Mr. Thomas in the toilet in a bar, pointed his pistol at him but Mr. Thomas assured him that he will pay him up in the next 3 hours. Andrew got calm and started hanging around the external parts of the bar for 3 hours hoping that everything will end that day.

Mr. Thomas was found dead outside but he wasn't really looking dead and everyone were surprised, seems he was strangled. Andrew got furious when saw him and he wasn't able to openly sell out some of Mr. Thomas' properties to get his money because if he narrates his story to the police, he will get arrested because it seems that he's the killer. Andrew learnt a great lesson and decided to be more careful with his dirty drug business to avoid complications.

Mrs. Jane got so furious about his death and even Gad, none of these people were brave enough to seek for compensation because they don't want their true identity to be revealed. Gad repented for good and never had peace of mind, the police kept on investing the matter for years because it was a very complicated matter, they weren't able to get the real suspects and killer because alot of people have done dirty business with Mr. Thomas. Dear friends, WHO KILLED MR. THOMAS?*.

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Funny enough, things like this do happen in real life…

This is going to be a long case for the police because apart from the three prime suspects, he still have some other enemies that we don’t know…

To make the case easy, the police should go n consult st Kelvin, he knows the answer!

Yes it happens in reality, alot of things happen day by day all over the world as corruption increases.

Mr. Thomas has alot of enemies and some of them have threatened to kill him so this isn't an easy case at all.

To make the case easy, the police should go n consult st Kelvin, he knows the answer!

Hahahaha I can't stop laughing at this. But who do you think is the killer?

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Mr. Thomas shouldn't have died yet...
He had some unfinished business and he just left...
I'm sure the one who killed Mr. Thomas was someone who also had a grudge against him...
And it must have been someone stronger than Mr. Thomas because he choked and died...
Hmm, who is the killer?

Enjoyed reading your publication,... Good luck... 👍

Death can come anytime, Mr. Thomas never believed he will die, yes Mr. isn't a very strong man who's old abit so someone stronger than him killed him but among the 3 suspects we already know, who did you think killed him?

Enjoyed reading your publication,... Good luck... 👍

Thanks 😊

The perpetrator might be himself, because he had too much to bear, maybe committed suicide?
When Mr. Thomas told Andrew to wait a moment....

😂😂 Incredible answer, that means Mr. Thomas told Andrew to wait because he wants to kill himself. 😊

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A very good answer since he didn't look dead 😁

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