Hey @zoyasoomro

There are few things you have to work on while writing a diary. Please refer to these posts and if you have any problem you can ask.

Important Notice for Everyone ! - Please Take Care of The Word "Diary" in Tags and Title Aswell

Write Diary Games That Inspire! Title/Story/Alignment/Styling/Footer

• While adding tags make sure some tags are important
  #steemexclusive #thediarygame #betterlife

• Attach the link of your verified achievement 1.

• Use steemit Pakistan's assets in your diaries to make them presentable.

• Try to use clear images. They give a good impact and a reader enjoys the diary.

• Write at least 300 words to tell how was your day. And use markdowns. I will suggest you complete till Achievement 4 : Applying Markdown in Newcomers' Community

Looking forward to your next diary :)
HAPPY STEEMING!