Steemit Engagement Challenge / S19W3 - "My life in paranormal."

in Knack4buzz19 hours ago (edited)

Hello all steemian friends

This is my participation in SEC S19W3-My life in paranormal By @hive-135004 in Knack4buzz •


This story is based on a true incident, but due to the limit of 700 words I am writing it in brief and I was also there too.

Surabhi had come here with her husband two days ago to celebrate their honeymoon. These bungalows were not very beautiful to look at from outside, but 5 star facilities were provided inside the bungalows.

Surabhi said to Akash as soon as she reached there, "This place looks very familiar to me. I have seen this place many times in my dreams.

Akash said, are you crazy, we have come here for the first time"

Built on the top of the mountains, surrounded by pine trees, tourists used to come to spend summer holidays at this place. The view here was very pleasant and relaxing.

Many more old bungalows were built around that old bungalow. The owners of these bungalows had also converted these bungalows into hotels and started renting them out to tourists.

But there was no sign of anyone living in the bungalow next to the one in which Surabhi and her husband Akash were living. Perhaps no one lived there and it was completely deserted.

It seemed as if no one had come to live in that bungalow for many years. Surabhi was told by the caretaker of her bungalow that no one had lived there since a woman had died there.

Many newlywed couples, fond of seeing the beauty of the mountains and living in solitude, used to come here on the advice of their tour operators and spend a few days.

This place was a secluded and very attractive place, different from the crowded places of common tourist places.

3-4 days later when Surbhi and her husband Akash were walking on the road after dinner at night, Surbhi saw a woman staring at her in that bungalow, this woman looked exactly like Surbhi.

Surbhi got scared and said to Akash, "Look there is a woman in that empty bungalow."

Akash said "This is your illusion, there is no one there."

But Surbhi could still see that woman, both of them quickly reached their bungalow. Surbhi could not sleep the whole night.

Next day in the afternoon Surbhi thought that she must solve this mystery. She was a brave girl, so she went alone to that empty bungalow.

She saw that the lock of the bungalow door was open. She went inside and saw that a woman who looked exactly like her was sitting on an old chair.

The woman said to Surabhi, "Come Surabhi, I have been waiting for you for 25 years. I was murdered right here in this bungalow and my boyfriend who murdered me is having fun in the world. My body is buried outside in the lawn."

Despite being fearless, Surabhi got very scared. She gathered courage and asked, "Why did you tell me this after so many years?"

The woman said, "Because actually you are my reincarnation and you have come here with my will." "That is why I want you to investigate my murder and send the murderer to jail. Then my soul will be free." Saying this, she disappeared from there.

Surabhi saw her own photo hanging on the wall of that room. She quickly picked up the photo from there and reached her bungalow.

She showed the photo to Akash and told him everything. At first Akash did not believe her but after seeing the photo, he started believing it little by little.

Both of them reached the police station with the photo that day and told the incharge everything.

The incharge was also taking them as a joke, but seeing the photo and Surabhi's insistence, he was forced to take action. The police team got that place excavated in the bungalow that day and a skeleton was found there.

Surabhi and Akash stayed there till the forensic investigation was done. The investigation revealed that the woman was around 20-22 years old and she was strangled to death. Then the police started a campaign to catch the murderer of that woman.

And this way a soul came forward and solved the mystery of its own murder.

I also want to invite here to read and comment on my story.
@patjewell, @paholags, @senehasa @mehwish-almas @haidee and @reseleena
Thanks for reading my post .

With regards
@sur-riti❤️

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Wow! Okay!
This is the first time that I've heard of something as real as this.
Does it surprise me? Not at all.
I've learned over the years that weird and wonderful things happen in this world of ours. Not in books for movies, but in the real world.

Good luck with the contest!
I've dropped an entry.

 16 hours ago 

This story sounds most mysterious to me. I'm glad finally Surabhi's look-alike found her murderer in a strange style. Then everything is possible in this world. I believe we still do not know all the secrets of the paranormal world.

Respected Sir,
Thanks a lot for your inspiring comment, but she was not a look alike but her reincarnation. And it is true that we will never know all the mysteries and secrets of our paranormal life . Maybe this birth is not enough.
Thanks a lot.

Your story reminds me of a movie I saw a long time ago that had the similar backstory. I cannot believe it is an actual incidence, but since you mentioned it, we had to accept it. If I were Surabhi, I would have fled that bungalow as soon as I saw that woman. Good luck with the contest.

@senehasa
Your comments are very impressive, and it is because it is not a big deal to write stories and make movies on such subjects in our continent. But answer me this question that if you were Surabhi, why would you run away from there. Please tell me quickly, otherwise I will have to write a new story on this statement of yours too.

I am scared of ghosts and the dark; considering this is a ghost, I will flee the scene.

Very good news, the next time I write a story, it will be based on your statement "I am afraid of ghosts and darkness". I will make you read it too.

It is good, I am awaiting.

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@sur-riti
I like your story, very much The way you showed Surabhi being reborn as that woman in your story does not seem to be a thing to be believed, but there are many things in this world that we are yet to know. Perhaps knowing the secrets of the paranormal world is still a distant dream.

Hello friend

Indeed this remains a breath taking story, it got scary at the first instance, Is reincarnation real? That's a story for another day, I'm really glad you shared how she got the the root of an investigation due to great boldness and curiosity. Most times we are just a step away from saving lives. I enjoyed your article and success in the dynamics.

Hello friend,
I am happy that you liked my story, but I also know that you do not believe in the concept of reincarnation in religion. I also did not believe in it, but everything is possible in the imaginary world.
Thank you.

Pleasures to you my dear friend.

Strange! But not, as for many others, because we Indo-Pak generations have listened to such stories since our childhood. But you pointed out that this is a real story and this is something strange. Well, the ending is good. Surbi done, what is right. And I'm a reader who always seeks good ending stories.🤞👍

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