Story Review by dinaks44

in CampusConnect2 years ago

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In the eye of the storm

Chapter 7:To watch for fat and gold


Plot:

well placed events and actions put at the right time when needed


Setting:

the thoughts and actions were exquisite in their placement.


Characterization:

Mr Ambrose didn’t show much of the cold attitude but he did show it. Lily the curious and talkative remains that at an average level.


Play :

Lily enters Mr Ambrose office and with a cold stare to the paper, lily notices that look isn’t only for the paper . Mr Ambrose request for lily to check if his cane has arrived. He explaines to her how the old one left his hand when swimming back ashore and lily asked when he needed it,he answers for protection no lily knows he is up to something. Lily goes her office to the pneumatic tube and writes a message to one of the workers Pearson to ask if the cane has arrived but his reply came in as a no. She moves back into his office telling him and he goes taking out a stick which is ceremonial gift he was given, he then shows lily the message he received from his factory, it was from the manager saying they were under attack and he resigns. He told lily he showed her this because she was following him , lily was shocked and requested for a weapon but was answered by the fact she won’t need one since she was as strong as men which got her angry. As they moved down stairs lily thoughts were happy they were going on an adventure again, she asked about karim a giant who is mr Ambrose body guard who is suitable for this kind of stuff but was greeted with silence. The came out of the company and mr Ambrose began to walk down the street , lily asked where’s the cab but he she flicked his fingers telling her is not far.
When the reached the factory, a stone took off mr Ambrose hat and all eyes went up seeing a boy up on the rooftop getting ready to swing another stone but was looked on by a cold look by mr Ambrose brought his hands down . Mr Ambrose took his hat off the floor , dusting it off and moving towards the gate of the factory . He asked the little boy what was going and he replied saying they are tired of being controlled by that son of a bitch called Ambrose, lily covered her mouth on hearing that , mr Ambrose asked if the boy had see. Mr Ambrose before he said no and he told him keep waiting for him to be coming in with a cart made of gold and walked inside factory. Another boy by the factory window was ready to fire another but was greeted by the same cold look and lily out of concern ask him it will be nice if we don’t go in there because they were shout of metals clashing and bottles breaking and he told she can leave at anytime she wants and walked right in . Lily thought this would be a nice adventure and again and ran in after him.
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