In the eye of the storm

Chapter 4/5 :

happy homecoming and study in the gold.

Plot:

I would say I didn’t like this plot at all, I got a little confused on the way, went back like 3 times to be sure of where I am. I’d say he rushed this part.

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Setting:

The setting wasn’t nice, the actions and thoughts were disturbing leaving the reader to be confused. But chapter 5 was a make up for it. He took his time there.

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Characterization:

this is the part of the story I love so much, the way he puts in efforts in keeping each character to each person is wonderful. He did well in this aspect.

Play:

on lily way to the room after changing from a man’s attire is caught by her aunt, she lily classifies her aunt as wicked but is just a woman who just wants social status and wants to marry them
of to rich men(them I mean her sisters). He aunt began asking her where she has been for over one week and she sarcastically trying to turn down the question. The aunt approaching her furiously and she moves back not knowing a door was at her back . That door is the door to her uncle’s room. Her aunt opens the door and say to her “let’s see if he will accept you” she walks in the room for some minute, lates back lily who head is telling her to run but if she runs where would she go, she decides to wait and her aunt comes out telling her he wants to see you , she gave her a pleading face but she over looked it . Lily went into the dark room standing still allowing her eyes to adjust to it. Then a voice came to her to step forward , she didn’t but it requested her to move further. Finally she saw her uncle who she hasn’t seen for years due to his early to work nemesis every day . He asked her about her absence but she said she couldn’t tell him and requested as a punishment he wouldn’t give her allowance for dresses and jewelries and he was shocked by her proposal and agreed . Lily left the room and kept a facing of a crying child making her aunt to believe she was given a punishment. Lily went down to her room meeting her little sister Ella who was sobbing on her own bed crying lily lily why have you left me,she didn’t know what to do she just watched her sister cry over her picture,then she was shocked because she never got a portrait before then she made her presence known right before Ella fainted. Meanwhile her aunt went to organize a ball for the return of lily, lily didn’t like balls so she was threatened you her aunt to attend. On the day her aunt hired a large cart for her and her sister last and reaching the ball,lily met her best friends , patsy being on of them asked her where she has been , lily didn’t want to say and she laid a threat that if she didn’t talk she would go out there and announce that Lily linton wants to have a dance with every man who wanted a dance. Patsy stocked to her words and lily danced with over 15 guys and marching all on the foot . Her foot arched and she needed to hide from the other men who wanted a dance and treat her sore then a familiar voice came.
Sorry for the mixup I went I went too far when writing it thereby mixing the two chapters.
Wait for chapter 6 to know who it is.
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