This story has been removed by the author.
Since writing this story, a lot has changed. I've grown as a writer and editor, and the story has been heavily revised. It will be submitted to a mainstream market and find a second life there, hopefully.
Come and check out some of my other work at www.jasminearch.com, or if you feel like hanging out with a bunc of crazy writers, come and hang out at The INKubator.